I wrote this story some time ago as part of a writer’s workshop. I decided to open the story with dialog and as I continued to write, the dialog just kept flowing. So, I let it flow! It was just as much fun to write as it is to read! Enjoy!
“Mel, you have nothing to worry about. Just relax. If you look nervous, they’ll know!”
“I can’t help it. I’ve never done anything like this before. Are you sure no one will notice?”
“Positive. I’ve been doing this once a month for the last year and I haven’t been caught yet. Just act like you are checking prices. Do a lot of inspecting so you look like a serious shopper.”
“Oh! Excuse me.”
“I get a little windy when I’m nervous. Sorry!”
“I can’t help it Lynn! We could go to jail! Do you know what happens…
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